International Journal of Ad Hoc & Sensor Wireless Networks ========================================================== Special Issue for MSN05 PAPER REVIEW FORM ----------------- Title: Approximate Optimal Power Allocation Scheme for Wireless Ad hoc Networks in Rayleigh Fading Channels Author(s): Dan Xu , Zhisheng Niu , Fangyu Hu Reviewer: Jean-Michel Dricot Date To Be Returned: 10 Jan 06 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- I. NUMERICAL RATING OF THE PAPER: --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rating Category Your Rating Scale Definition --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Level of 5=Excellent Reader Interest |-----| 4=Very good | 4 | 3=Good |-----| 2=Fair 1=Poor --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Evaluation of Work 5=Excellent work and a major contribution and Contribution |-----| 4=Good solid work of some importance | 4 | 3=Solid work but marginal contribution |-----| 2=Marginal work and very minor contribution 1=Very questionable work and contribution --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originality 5=Highly original work Novelty |-----| 4=Contains an original contribution | 4 | 3=Somewhat original |-----| 2=Variation of a known concept 1=Complete lack of original ideas --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Practical Utility 5=Excellent |-----| 4=Very good | 5 | 3=Good |-----| 2=Fair 1=Poor --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Quality of 5=Very good Presentation |-----| 4=Basically well written | 5 | 3=Readable |-----| 2=Needs considerable work 1=Unacceptably bad --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Technical 5=Very good Correctness |-----| 4=Good | 4 | 3=Flaws but easy to correct |-----| 2=Some flaws 1=Unacceptably bad --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Overall Rating 5=Strong accept (very good quality) (could be .5) |-----| 4=Accept (good quality) | 4 | 3=Accept if room (marginal quality) |-----| 2=Likely reject (low quality) 1=Definitely reject (has no merit) --------------------------------------------------------------------------- II. SPECIFIC COMMENTS & SUGGESTIONS (to be made available to the author(s)): ------------------------------------ 1. There are some typos like: - distance dependent -> distance-dependent - near optimal -> near-optimal - etc. 2. On equation (6) and (17), the authors should tell what is "s.t." under the min sign of the sum. 3. In chapt.I, second paragraph, "Much work [1][2][3][4][5]..." : the extensive enumeration of references does not look good. The rest of paragraph is self-contained are and well-written enough. III. CONFIDENTIAL COMMENTS (IF ANY) to be withheld from the author(s): ------------------------------------ Comments given under THIS item are for the EDITORS ONLY (to be withheld from the authors).